TPQ-01 · Treatment page quality

Treatment page quality rubric

A twelve-criterion rubric for assessing a single treatment page against stated quality descriptors, with banded interpretations and stated limits.

By the Rank My Clinic assessment desk· ·1844 words· 12 criteria

What this instrument establishes

A treatment page quality rubric assesses one page describing one procedure against twelve criteria: what is done, candidacy, exclusions, experience, recovery, risks, results and their limits, alternatives, price, practitioner identity, next step and review currency. Each is scored 0 to 3 against a written descriptor. It assesses a single page. It does not assess the site, the clinic, or the appropriateness of the procedure.

Treatment page quality rubric: measurement and calibration study

Why one page at a time

Site-wide content audits produce a spreadsheet nobody reads. The reason is that content quality is not a property of a site; it is a property of a page, and the aggregate hides the variation that matters. A clinic with fourteen treatment pages typically has two excellent ones, written when somebody cared, and twelve written to fill a menu.

Scoring one page at a time is slower and produces something usable: a specific page with specific missing sections and a specific person who can write them. It also lets a clinic sequence properly, starting with the procedure it most wants to perform rather than with whichever page appears first alphabetically.

The twelve criteria are ordered roughly as a reader encounters the questions. That ordering is useful when a page scores badly overall, because it tells you where the page stops being useful. A page that scores well on the first four criteria and collapses afterwards is a page that describes the procedure and then starts selling.

The rubric deliberately gives equal weight to criteria that help the sale and criteria that hinder it. Exclusions, risks and alternatives carry the same three points as the description of results. A clinic that finds this balance unreasonable has learned something about its own page.

How to score a page

Print the page, or read it in a reading mode that strips navigation. You are assessing what the page says, not how it looks.

Read it once through without scoring. Then score each criterion against its descriptor, marking the specific sentence that justifies each score of 2 or 3. If you cannot point at a sentence, the score is 1 at most. This single discipline prevents most inflation.

Score exclusions and risks against the clinic's own consent documentation. If the consent form names complications the page does not, the page scores 0 on that row regardless of how carefully it is written, because the clinic has demonstrated it knows something it chose not to publish.

Have a non-clinician score the same page independently. Clinicians reliably over-score the description criteria, because they read what the page implies to a trained reader. Non-clinicians reliably under-score risk criteria, because unfamiliar terms read as more alarming than they are. The disagreement is the useful part.

Record the total, the date and the page address. Twelve criteria give a maximum of 36.

Common scoring errors

Crediting a linked consent form. The criterion asks what the page says. A link to a document the reader will not open before enquiring does not satisfy it.

Scoring risk coverage by word count. Three named complications with the clinic's response scores higher than four paragraphs of general caution.

Treating a price on a separate page as absent. If the treatment page links directly to a specific figure for this procedure, score 2. Reserve 0 for the case where no figure exists anywhere.

Scoring "results vary" as a statement of limits. It is a disclaimer. A statement of limits says what the procedure will not achieve.

Scoring the page you are about to publish. Score the live page. The improved version can be scored when it exists, and the comparison is the point.

Using the rubric as an editorial standard

The most useful thing a clinic can do with this rubric is stop using it as an audit and start using it as a specification. A page written against the twelve criteria from the beginning takes about the same time to write as a page written from a competitor's page, and it does not need auditing afterwards.

Give the rubric to whoever writes your pages, internal or external, as the acceptance condition. A supplier who receives twelve written criteria before starting produces something different from a supplier who receives a word count and a list of phrases to include. It also makes acceptance a matter of scoring rather than of opinion, which removes the most common argument in clinic marketing.

Pair it with two other instruments. The claim substantiation checklist asks whether each statement on the page can be supported, which the rubric does not test. The advertising compliance self-audit asks whether the page is permissible, which is a different question again and the one with regulatory consequences.

Re-score a page when the technique changes, when the product changes, when the price changes, or annually. Pages age quietly, and a page describing a device the clinic replaced eighteen months ago is a common and avoidable finding.

TPQ-01

Treatment page quality rubric

What it measures
The completeness, balance and usability of one treatment page, assessed against twelve written descriptors.
What it does not measure
It assesses one page at a time and says nothing about the rest of the site, about traffic, or about whether the treatment is appropriate for anybody.
Scoring method
Criterion referenced. 12 criteria, each scored 0 to 3 against the descriptor given. Maximum 36.
Evidence needed
One treatment page, printed or open on screen, and the clinic's own consent documentation for the same procedure.
Working time
Around 25 minutes per page.
Who should score it
Ideally a clinician and a non-clinician scoring separately, since they notice different failures.
Band scale
  • 0 Absent
  • 1 Emerging
  • 2 Established
  • 3 Embedded
  1. 01

    The procedure is described concretely

    A reader learns what is physically done, with what, and by whom. Score 0 if the page describes benefits without describing the procedure, 3 if a reader could explain the procedure to somebody else after reading it.

  2. 02

    Candidacy is stated

    The page says who the procedure suits, in terms a reader can apply to themselves. Score 0 if it implies everybody, 3 if characteristics of a suitable candidate are specific.

  3. 03

    Exclusions are stated

    Contraindications and reasons the clinic would decline appear on the page, not only in a consent form. Score 0 if absent, 3 if stated clearly and without hedging.

  4. 04

    The experience is described

    Duration, sensation, anaesthesia and what the appointment involves from arrival to departure. Score 0 if absent, 3 if a reader knows what their afternoon looks like.

  5. 05

    Recovery is described with a timeline

    Expected side effects and their duration, restrictions, and when normal activity resumes. Score 0 if described only as minimal, 3 if a day-by-day or week-by-week account is given.

  6. 06

    Risks are named

    Recognised complications are named rather than gestured at, with the clinic's response to each. Score 0 if risks appear only as a general caveat, 3 if named, described and paired with what the clinic does.

  7. 07

    Results are described with their limits

    What the procedure achieves, how long it lasts, and what it will not achieve. Score 0 if results are described only in superlatives, 3 if ranges and limits are stated.

  8. 08

    Alternatives are offered fairly

    Including doing nothing, and including options this clinic does not provide. Score 0 if no alternative is named, 3 if alternatives are described without being disparaged.

  9. 09

    Price and inclusions are stated

    A price or stated range, what it includes, and what a review or correction would cost. Score 0 if no figure appears, 3 if figure, inclusions and follow-up costs are all present.

  10. 10

    The practitioner is identified

    Who performs the procedure, their role, registration and supervision. Score 0 if unstated, 3 if named or role-specified with a route to verify registration.

  11. 11

    The next step is unambiguous

    What happens if the reader wants to proceed, including whether a consultation is required and whether it is chargeable. Score 0 if the only route is a form, 3 if the sequence is described.

  12. 12

    The page is dated and reviewed

    A review date appears and reflects a genuine clinical review. Score 0 if undated or automatically refreshed, 3 if dated, reviewed and the reviewer's role is stated.

Total score 0/ 36 Not yet scored

Scoring runs in your browser and nowhere else. Nothing is saved, nothing is sent to us, and closing the page clears it. Print this page to fill the instrument in on paper.

Band interpretations

0 to 12Absent

The page is a sales page with clinical vocabulary. A reader cannot establish what would happen to them, what could go wrong, or whether they are a candidate, which means every one of those conversations has to happen by telephone.

Next action. Add exclusions, risks and recovery in that order. Those three change the page from promotion to information and are the three most often missing.

13 to 21Emerging

The page informs partially. It describes the procedure and the result but avoids the material that might deter a reader, which is the material a reader most needs.

Next action. Score each criterion that came out 0 or 1 and write the missing sections. Resist rewriting the parts that already work.

22 to 30Established

The page is a usable account of the procedure. Remaining gaps tend to be price, alternatives or the identity of the practitioner.

Next action. Close the remaining rows and set a review date with a named reviewer. Then run the rubric on your next most important page.

31 to 36Embedded

The page could be handed to a patient in a consultation without embarrassment or supplementation. It informs, it is balanced, and it is current.

Next action. Use it as the internal template for every other treatment page, and re-score annually or whenever the technique, product or price changes.

Treatment page quality instrument TPQ-01. Bands are criterion referenced: they describe your operation against the descriptors above, not against any other clinic. No comparative benchmark for UK aesthetic clinics is published, so this instrument does not pretend to one.

What this instrument does not tell you

  • Whether the procedure described is clinically appropriate for any individual. This is a rubric for a page, not for a treatment decision.
  • Whether the page complies with UK advertising rules. Overlap exists, but compliance is assessed by its own instrument against the published codes.
  • Whether the page is accurate. A well-structured page can be wrong, and the rubric cannot check clinical fact for you.
  • Whether the page performs commercially. It does not consider traffic, conversion or revenue at all.
  • How your page compares with other clinics' pages. No comparative dataset exists and none is implied by the bands.

Every instrument on this site carries this block. An assessment that will not state its own limits is a sales document with a scale printed on it.

Questions about this instrument

Should every treatment page really carry a price?

The rubric scores the presence of a figure because readers ask for one, not because publishing prices is obligatory. A clinic that has decided against publishing prices should score 0 on that row and accept it as a deliberate trade. What the rubric will not do is treat 'price on consultation' as though it answered the question.

Who should score the pages, clinical or marketing staff?

Both, separately, then reconcile. The rubric is designed to expose the difference between what a clinician thinks the page says and what a lay reader takes from it, and that difference is usually where the page fails.

Is 36 out of 36 a realistic target?

For your two or three most important pages, yes. Across a menu of twenty procedures it is not a sensible use of clinic time, and pursuing it tends to produce padding. Score every page, bring the important ones to the top band, and bring the rest above the second.

Does a longer page score better?

No. Several criteria are satisfied by a single well-written sentence, and length is not scored at all. Long pages often score worse on the next-step criterion because the instruction disappears into the middle.

How does this differ from a general content audit?

A general audit asks whether a page is good. This rubric asks twelve specific questions with written descriptors, which means two people scoring the same page usually arrive within two or three points of each other. Reproducibility is the whole point of using a rubric rather than an opinion.

Sources

  1. General Medical Council: guidance for doctors who offer cosmetic interventions
  2. Advertising Standards Authority: the non-broadcast advertising code
  3. NHS: cosmetic procedures
  4. Joint Council for Cosmetic Practitioners

Disclosure. This instrument contains no commercial links of any kind. Rank My Clinic is published by Northbank Media. We do not rank clinics, we do not rank suppliers, and no organisation can pay to influence any criterion, band or interpretation. Nothing here is medical, legal or regulatory advice.

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